presentation feedback

14th of November


1. Janis
About website, her website looks simple and clean. also It is easy to use website.
but I couldn't see her progression route clearly. she can put product design picture that she was inspired.
About major project, her progression in her major project is clear. in addition, the idea is impressed.
she has the detail plan for major project, but I think she can put pictures more.








2. Dowhee (me)












3. Augustyna Janczak
-major project
I like using own picture for major project. major project related to her progression route. I suggest research for your major project. also some commentary.
-website
I like her homepage design. simple and eye catching page. other page also interesting.
good organizing portfolio page; looks simple and clear . you can put picture related to your progression route.




16th of November




4.  Khaled
about website : organise well. easy to use.
blog: he got many blog posts.
main project : I like his mood board
lots of research for project. I can see specific target market of his work.
I think he could put a story line of the project.




5. Kate
website : easy to use. I would like to see some pictures related to her progression route.
main project : I like her main project idea. her project is related to her progression route. However, I think she could do more research and process.




6. Santiago
website: I like his homepage design. I can see his progression route well.
hart to read a text.  SNS icons are too small.
main project : google map, he did research in various way.




7. Aga
In terms of the website, I like her logo design. I could not read the group of word below the logo, so try changing colour.
main project: she can add what you inspire for major project and why.




8. Jessica
I like her homepage design. eye catching and navigate well.  looks really good.
nee to put screenshot of process more.


17th of November


9. Sujin
website : I like her website homepage.
She organise her gallery and about me page. However, she can change font bigger.
Blog : she got specific idea of main project that related to her progression route.
suitable researches, develop idea post. a lot of post of main project.


10. Nathan
Website : really good. progression route clear. easy to go.
Blog : his idea of major project was very interesting. good process, practice and reflection.  I think he need to post little bit more.


11. Jaewan
website : eye catching. I like homepage
blog: he need putting more commentary on first major project. In addition, he could put more reflection. the background of blog page makes me confuse to read sometimes, so It would be better if he change his background of the blog.


12. Angel
website : put some commentary on major project. easy to use. I like her gallery animation.
Blog : good research and process(practice)


13. Jason
website : hard to read the texts of homepage.
blog : the pictures he posted was too small. I think he could change pictures bigger.